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Crimson Obsession
homo sum; humani nihil mihi alienum est
Drabble: 'Favortism,' Fandom: Invader ZIM, Pairing: ZIM/Tallest 
15th-Jun-2006 10:06 am
Rough... (by my Idgiebay)
Look, I haven't forgotten I'm supposed to be doing these! For neofox!

Disclaimer: They're not mine, and Jhonen would probably jump into a grave just so that he can roll over in it if he saw this. :D They belong to teh Jhonen, and Nickelodeon (BOOOOOOOO) and I'm only playing (rough) with them.

The Irken race has reproduced through technology for as long as their history records. The relevant organs are all but gone; but the brain is strong, and the sensations aren't so much destroyed as dormant.

The Irken was small, talented, and entirely at their disposal. He knelt before them, claws traveling reverantly over thick green skin, dipping beneath armor.

"I live to serve you, my Tallest; to serve at the head of your armies, and bring our power to the universe. I long to spread the word of you glory, to every living thing." His tongue flicked, snake-like, over skin, and one of them moaned.

"Whatever, whatever! Just hurry up and do it!" The voice was impatient, hiding desperation.

He smiled, a satisfied grin that split his face and bared his teeth...then dipped low.
15th-Jun-2006 05:26 pm (UTC)
Ahahahaha, nice. XD I think I like the first little bit the best. It's a very good set up. I'm not sure about Zim's dialogue though. I'm always a bit put off when people make him sound... smart? Competant? I don't know. XD I made you write Zim/Keef, so everything I ever say is eclipsed by that. XDDDD

I wonder which Tallest he's with... I'm kind of fond of Purple/Zim. Maybe because they're both really stupid.
16th-Jun-2006 07:33 am (UTC)
I can see what you mean. It's been forever since I wrote Zim, and I'm not sure I ever got him right in the first place, heh. But he obviously likes to think he IS competent, and sometimes he almost sounds it. Maybe he's just missing that punchline, the thing at the end that makes it obvious he's no more intelligent than he ever was. Something to ponder...not that I'm ever gonna write Zim again... [whistle]

Sore wa himitsu desu! Heeee.
15th-Jun-2006 06:59 pm (UTC)
16th-Jun-2006 07:34 am (UTC)
Is that good? :D Hope you liked it!

[poke] How's the inking part of my commission coming? ^_~
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